Thursday, 2 May 2019

CC - Presentation Feedback


As can be seen below in figure 1 we receive feedback from the tutors, we were unsuccessful in securing the pitch. The feedback explained that the concept is well thought out and the work was produced to a high standard and presented as such.

However, they felt the branding needed to be ‘joyful, celebratory and fun’ which apparently did not come across within our designs. This was not part of the brief, nor notified as a requirement at any point of the briefing. Therefore, being an art University, we decided to focus on the concept and ensuring a professional design that both the University and the industry could be proud of rather making something that appeared to be ‘fun’.
it was suggested that we should push the electronics into a glitch in lo-fi direction although this would create a need for an animation and motion style throughout the branding itself completely contrasting against the style we created. Furthermore, the typefaces were described as safe, yet all were considered and had deep reasoning behind.


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